Gin Ichimaru
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"Would you like me to save you?... Just kidding."
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Post by Gin Ichimaru on Jun 1, 2010 14:37:36 GMT -5
Quite a few problems here...
- Explain about your Inner Hollow in more detail.
- Your first Bankai ability is basically the same as your Shikai abilities. Shikai abilities can still be use din Bankai, and they are still more powerful, so there's no need to make it a Bankai ability. Just make the violin the second Shikai instead of whistling.
- Your history is over done. She can't pass the academy in five months- Gin Ichimaru was a prodigy, and it took him a year. Make it at least two years. As for achieving Bankai, including gaining mastery over it, that should be a total of ten years minimum. And you need to explain what happened to you in the last century.
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Koori
Junior Member
The Raven is the Sign of Death. As I Hid the Body One Came Over To Me and Gave Me Its Eye.Death Wish
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Post by Koori on Jun 1, 2010 15:41:45 GMT -5
Rena was alone for 5 mounths within the academy, She was still in the academy for longer -.-
And she cant use the violin in shaiki becuase Its BANKAI ONLY.And the Bankai ability one is the two shaiki ability combined.
And it was explained she trained with ukitake and she took er missions as usal...........
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Rijuen
Co Admin
Rijuen Zinbou, Lami, Kageaki Minato
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Post by Rijuen on Jun 2, 2010 3:47:30 GMT -5
This again "the mists cannot be blown away" this is still god modding, you have been told about this in chat and Alexia told you about it in the last make of this, and also shikai ability 2 the whistling, still unable to defend against... it must be abelt to be blocked some way, just as your mists. this is all technically god modding, you cannot say somethign will always hit, example, your whistling... you can't even defend against it by blocking your ears... thats god modding... and again the mists, everything has to be able to be blown away. say senbonzakura wasn't able to be blown away.... no one would stand a chance. so in other words the god modding HAS to go or i will speak to Alexia about having this application deleted all together.
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Koori
Junior Member
The Raven is the Sign of Death. As I Hid the Body One Came Over To Me and Gave Me Its Eye.Death Wish
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Post by Koori on Jun 2, 2010 14:06:38 GMT -5
Fixed :@!!!!!!!!! If you plug your ears with your fingers the effect is still there becuase sound can still get through your ears even when plugging them with your fingers.
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Gin Ichimaru
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"Would you like me to save you?... Just kidding."
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Post by Gin Ichimaru on Jun 3, 2010 11:19:56 GMT -5
You still haven't fixed the Inner Hollow part. Your first Bankai ability is useless- you may as well have only two Bankai abilities. And please make how long she spent in the academy/ obtaining Bankai clearer.
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Koori
Junior Member
The Raven is the Sign of Death. As I Hid the Body One Came Over To Me and Gave Me Its Eye.Death Wish
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Post by Koori on Jun 3, 2010 13:32:28 GMT -5
how is it use less its both the shikai abilitys in one
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Gin Ichimaru
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Post by Gin Ichimaru on Jun 4, 2010 13:09:43 GMT -5
Shikai abilities can still be used in Bankai. And they can theoretically be used at the same time anyway.
Where the hell did the app go?!?!?
I'm really not sure our characters should be related. Way too much trouble. So, I'm gonna remake my app as a single character. No offense to you, but I prefer it that way.
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